SENTENCE STRUCTURE
1. Simple Sentences
A simple sentence has the most basic elements that make it a sentence:
a subject, a verb, and a completed thought.
Examples of simple sentences include the following:
- Joe waited for the train.
"Joe" = subject, "waited" = verb
- The train was late.
"The train" = subject, "was" = verb
- Mary and Samantha took the bus.
"Mary and Samantha" = compound subject,
"took" = verb
- I looked for Mary and Samantha at the bus station.
"I" = subject,
"looked" = verb
- Mary and Samantha arrived at the bus station before noon and left on the
bus before I arrived.
"Mary and Samantha" = compound subject, "arrived" and
"left" = compound verb
Tip: If you use many simple sentences in an essay, you should
consider revising some of the sentences into compound or complex sentences
(explained below).
The use of compound subjects, compound verbs, prepositional phrases
(such as "at the bus station"), and other elements help lengthen simple
sentences, but simple sentences often are short. The use of too many simple
sentences can make writing "choppy" and can prevent the writing from flowing
smoothly.
A simple sentence can also be referred to as an independent clause. It
is referred to as "independent" because, while it might be part of a compound or
complex sentence, it can also stand by itself as a complete sentence.
2. Compound Sentences
A compound sentence refers to a sentence made up of two independent
clauses (or complete sentences) connected to one another with a coordinating
conjunction. Coordinating conjunctions are easy to remember if you think of
the words "FAN BOYS":
- For
- And
- Nor
- But
- Or
- Yet
- So
Examples of compound sentences include the following:
- Joe waited for the train, but the train was late.
- I looked for Mary and Samantha at the bus station, but they arrived
at the station before noon and left on the bus before I arrived.
- Mary and Samantha arrived at the bus station before noon, and they
left on the bus before I arrived.
- Mary and Samantha left on the bus before I arrived, so I did not
see them at the bus station.
Tip: If you rely heavily on compound sentences in an essay,
you should consider revising some of them into complex sentences (explained
below).
Coordinating conjunctions are useful for connecting sentences, but compound
sentences often are overused. While coordinating conjunctions can indicate some
type of relationship between the two independent clauses in the sentence, they
sometimes do not indicate much of a relationship. The word "and," for example,
only adds one independent clause to another, without indicating how the two
parts of a sentence are logically related. Too many compound sentences that use
"and" can weaken writing.
Clearer and more specific relationships can be established through the use of
complex sentences.
3. Complex Sentences
A complex sentence is made up of an independent clause and one or more
dependent clauses connected to it. A dependent clause is similar to an
independent clause, or complete sentence, but it lacks one of the elements that
would make it a complete sentence.
Examples of dependent clauses include the following:
- because Mary and Samantha arrived at the bus station before noon
- while he waited at the train station
- after they left on the bus
Dependent clauses such as those above cannot stand alone as a
sentence, but they can be added to an independent clause to form a complex
sentence.
Dependent clauses begin with subordinating conjunctions. Below are
some of the most common subordinating conjunctions:
- after
- although
- as
- because
- before
- even though
- if
- since
- though
- unless
- until
- when
- whenever
- whereas
- wherever
- while
A complex sentence joins an independent clause with one or more dependent
clauses.
The dependent clauses can go first in the sentence, followed by the
independent clause, as in the following:
Tip: When the dependent clause comes first, a comma should be
used to separate the two clauses.
- Because Mary and Samantha arrived at the bus station before noon, I did
not see them at the station.
- While he waited at the train station, Joe realized that the train was
late.
- After they left on the bus, Mary and Samantha realized that Joe was
waiting at the train station.
Conversely, the independent clauses can go first in the sentence, followed by
the dependent clause, as in the following:
Tip: When the independent clause comes first, a comma should
not be used to separate the two clauses.
- I did not see them at the station because Mary and Samantha arrived at the
bus station before noon.
- Joe realized that the train was late while he waited at the train station.
- Mary and Samantha realized that Joe was waiting at the train station after
they left on the bus.
Complex sentences are often more effective than compound sentences because a
complex sentence indicates clearer and more specific relationships between the
main parts of the sentence. The word "before," for instance, tells readers that
one thing occurs before another. A word such as "although" conveys a more
complex relationship than a word such as "and" conveys.
The term periodic sentence is used to refer to a complex
sentence beginning with a dependent clause and ending with an independent
clause, as in "While he waited at the train station, Joe realized that the train
was late."
Periodic sentences can be especially effective because the
completed thought occurs at the end of it, so the first part of the sentence can
build up to the meaning that comes at the end.
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